Question

6．I Believe I Can Fly 是一首催人奮進的勵志歌曲．請你根據(jù)以下要點以"I Believe I Can Fly'為題，用英語寫一篇短文，參加某英語雜志社的寫作比賽．
內(nèi)容要點：1．這首歌告訴我們自信的重要性；
2．自信給勇氣去嘗試，使人成功；
3．夢想和自信，使人勇敢面對困難；
4．沒有夢想和自信，不會獲得成功；
5．你的感悟（考生自擬，至少一點）

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
You should have a dream that you want to be or want to do．你應(yīng)當有一個你想成為什么或者想干什么的夢想．
that引導(dǎo)的定語從句的應(yīng)用；want to be想成為什么
【高分句型二】
In my opinion，if  I did what I mentioned above，I believe that I can see the most beautiful view that no one can see．依我看來，如果我做到了上述內(nèi)容，我相信我會看到別人看不到的最美的風(fēng)景．
In my opinion依我看來；what I mentioned above，what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句；that I can see the most beautiful view，that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句；that no one can see，that引導(dǎo)的定語從句

解答 I Believe I Can Fly
When I heard the song"I Believe I can fly"，I always feel my chest is full of confidence．（引出下文）
Everyone hopes they can succeed someday，but the successful people are always in the minority．WHY？
Because there are some important elements for success．（提出問題）
Firstly，dreams．You should have a dream that you want to be or want to do．【高分句型一】It can be a goal．It is like a ship has a destination on the boundless sea．
Secondly，courage．You are not afraid of making a risk，like the saying"Nothing venture，nothing gain"．Don't always play safe．
Thirdly，confidence．You have to believe you can do that．Holding that spirit you can handle all kinds of difficulties on the way to success．
Last but not least，we always keep going．Don't quit on any time and any situation．（建議）
In my opinion，if  I did what I mentioned above，I believe that I can see the most beautiful view that no one can see．（我的理解）【高分句型二】

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