Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)。（共1題，計(jì)15分）

新班規(guī): 1. Don't listen to music or have snacks in the classroom;

2. You have to wear trainers in PE classes;

3. Don't stay at school after 5:00pm... 新班規(guī)實(shí)施前后，你的活動(dòng)如下表：

Before the new rules	Listen to music after class, play basketball after school
After the new rules	Feel stressed, have no time for hobbies
Your ideas	… …

你打算給班長(zhǎng)李明寫(xiě)一封信，告訴他：1.你的興趣愛(ài)好2.你的煩惱；3.你對(duì)新班規(guī)的建議(至少兩點(diǎn))。

注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，收信人和寫(xiě)信人的姓名已給出，但不計(jì)入詞數(shù)；

2.信中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校，班級(jí)和姓名。

Dear Li Ming:

I am writing to you to tell you something about my worries.

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I’ll be very happy if I can hear from you soon.

Zhou Yang

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Ming

I am writing to you to tell you something about my worries.

I have a lot of hobbies. I like listening to music and playing ball games with my classmates. I spend much time on my study, so I can only listen to music after class and play basketball after school with my classmates.

But you see the new class rules have come out. I feel very stressed and worried now. I can’t find any time for my hobbies. I can do nothing but write to you about my ideas.

I agree that we shouldn’t have snacks in the classroom. We should wear trainers in PE lessons. I think we should be allowed to listen to music after class. We can relax ourselves and then we will focus on our study in class. You should allow us to play basketball after school. If you disagree, how can I find other time to do so?

I will be very happy if I hear from you soon.

Zhou Yang

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封信介紹自己興趣，愛(ài)好和煩惱，以及自己對(duì)新班規(guī)的建議。本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語(yǔ)，句式等問(wèn)題。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱(chēng)就是第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問(wèn)題比較少。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。

考點(diǎn)：應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤。