Question

養成良好的習慣對我們的學習生活一直會有很大的幫助。請根據下表提示用英語寫一篇短文，發表在學校網站上。

良好的學習習慣	良好的生活習慣	益 處
課前預習 認真聽講 獨立作業	健康飲食 經常鍛煉 利用好時間	幫助我們更好地學習知識，提高技能 使我們學會自我控制
你的感受	（請結合自身認識，給出一至兩點）

注意：1．表達中必須包含所給要點，可以適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯。
2．詞數80左右。開頭已經寫好，不計入總詞數。
3．表達中請勿提及真實校名及姓名。
A Good Habit, a Successful School Life
A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.
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Answer 1

A Good Habit, a Successful School Life
A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.
In our school life, we should prepare well for each lesson. In class, we must listen to the teacher carefully. Besides, it’s important for us to do our homework on our own.
In our daily life, we ought to keep a healthy diet. Also, it’s necessary for us to exercise a lot. And we should learn to make good use of our time.
In a word, good habits can help us learn things better and improve our skills. We can learn to control ourselves if we have good habits.
I think good habits are really good for our mind and body.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發揮。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上；結合材料內容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現在時態進行敘述。語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如: A habit is something that ……；強調句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事對某人來說怎么樣等；make good use of充分利用……；連詞besides，also，and等的使用讓本文看起來更加條理清楚，符合邏輯關系。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 讓文章更出彩。