Question

12．目前中學生早餐問題已經引起社會關注，你所在學校針對這一問題開展問卷調查，其結果令人擔憂．請你根據調查結果寫一篇短文，倡導營養早餐．

類型	早餐情況	健康狀況	你的建議
A	每天吃早餐	身體健康，…
B	吃垃圾食品	營養不均衡，…
C	不吃早餐	…

提示詞：1．所寫內容必須包括表格中所提供的信息，并發表自己的看法．
2．可根據表格內容和提示詞進行適當發揮．
3．字數100詞左右．文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數．
Breakfast Is Important
Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its importance．Here's the result of our survey．Most students have breakfast regularly every day．They keep healthy and look active．Some of them just have junk food instead．They don't have a balanced diet．It is bad for their health．A few students go to school without breakfast．As a result，these students often feel hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully．What's worse，they get ill easily．
It's necessary/important （for us） to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內容是匯報中學生早餐情況的調查結果．倡導營養早餐．時態主要為一般現在時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．大部分學生每天吃早餐 身體健康，…
2．一些同學 吃垃圾食品 營養不均衡，…
3．少數同學 不吃早餐 …
4．我的建議
常用到的重點短語：
keep healthy 保持健康
junk food 垃圾食品
be bad for 對…不利
what's worse 更糟糕的是、
as a result  作為結果
【高分句型】
1．Some of them just have junk food instead．
instead表示代替，常放句末．
2．What's worse，they get ill easily．
what's worse 更糟糕的是，插入語．
3．It's necessary/important （for us） to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．

解答 Breakfast Is Important
 Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its importance．Here's the result of our survey．Most students have breakfast regularly every day．They keep healthy and look active．（大部分學生每天吃早餐 身體健康）Some of them just have junk food instead．【高分句型】They don't have a balanced diet．It is bad for their health．（一些同學 吃垃圾食品 營養不均衡）A few students go to school without breakfast．As a result，these students often feel hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully．What's worse，they get ill easily．【高分句型】（少數同學 不吃早餐 饑餓不能專心聽課，易生�。�
    It's necessary/important （for us） to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．【高分句型】（我的建議）

點評 本題是圍繞早飯問題展開敘述，首先應該說明吃早飯的重要性，然后，指出一些不健康的飲食習慣．最后，要發出倡議，號召大家堅持吃早飯．在寫作時，本文的主語可以用第三人稱，時態一般應該用一般現在時．應該盡量包括文中提示的內容，可稍加拓展．應該注意表述的邏輯性和條理性．盡量用簡單的語言來表述．