Question

每個人都應該有一種情懷---感恩。我們要感恩生命，感恩生活，感恩父母，感恩社會… 即將要畢業的你，對學習和生活了三年的母校充滿了眷念和感恩之情。假如你是善水中學的小月，想在學校舉行的演講比賽中抒發自己的感情，請根據下列信息完成演講稿。

注意：1. 100詞左右（短文的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）；

2.不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分；

3.不得原句翻譯，在必要處作適當發揮。

學校	1.校園環境優美，到處都是花草樹木 2. 教學樓、圖書館、操場齊全 3.教室寬敞明亮
老師	1.對待學生有愛心2.豐富的教學經驗 3. 對學生既嚴格又有耐心 4.對待我們像自己的孩子
同學	1. 互相學習、互相關心 2. ……(自擬一點)
感想	1. 心情愉悅，學習優秀 2. ……(自擬兩點)

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Our school is the best one in our hometown. The environment is very good: there are many trees and flowers around our school, the air is fresh. We often hear the birds sing .There are new big buildings、a library and a big playground. Our classroom is clean and bright. And especially the condition in our school is advanced.

Our teachers are experienced in teaching. They are strict with us, but when we have difficulty, they are patient enough. They treat us as their own children. How kind they are!

I like my classmates. We learn from and help each other. We share our happiness and sadness with each other, too!

I have spent three years in Shanshui Middle School. I have a great time and I am good at my studies. Sadly, I will leave here soon. But I will never forget my school, my teachers, and my friends. My teachers taught me knowledge; my classmates gave me friendship, my school left me a good memory. Shouldn’t I say thanks to my school, my teachers and my classmates?

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，主語是第一人稱，注意時態與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: have a great time玩的開心； We often hear the birds sing . 我們常常聽見鳥兒在唱；They treat us as their own children.他們把我們看做他們的孩子等,學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點：提綱作文。