Question

假如你是李明，你的美國筆友Jim想了解一下中國家庭的家規(guī)(family rules)，請你根據(jù)你家的情況給他寫一封回信，給Jim介紹一下你家的家規(guī)和你對家規(guī)的看法。要求：語言合理、語句通順；60詞左右；信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
Thank you for your letter. You want to know my family rules. Well, there are too many rules in my family.                                               
                                                                                   
                                                                                 
                                                                              
                                                                              
Yours,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Jim,
Thank you for your letter. You want to know my family rules. Well, there are too many rules in my family.  
My parents are very strict because I have so many family rules.
For example,I can't go out with my friends on school nights.On weekends, I have to go home before nine p.m. It's strict, but I think it's necessary.
And I must finish my homework in time. I can't play computer games. I have to wash clothes by myself.
I have to get up at six o'clock every morning.And I have to be in bed by ten o'clock.
Thanks to these rules.I can keep healthy.But I think it is unfair to be in bed by ten o'clock! Students need nine hours sleep!
And I think playing some computer games is not good for us children. So I think the family rules can make some changes.
Yours,
Li Ming

試題分析：本文是一封回信，要符合信的格式，因為這是給Jim一封回信介紹一下自己家的家規(guī)和自己對家規(guī)的看法，所以注意使用正確的主語。要注意主謂一致及動詞的時態(tài)。最后要寫出對家規(guī)的看法。
【亮點說明】本文使用了一些短語和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如: I can't go out with my friends on school nights. And I must finish my homework in time. I think it is unfair to be in bed by ten o'clock等，短文也使用了一些連詞如：but，because和and等。使句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜化了。