Question

8．同學們，在你們成長的過程中，想到過母親的付出嗎？請寫一篇90詞左右的小短文．
1．簡單介紹描述母親
2．母親為你做的一件事 
3．你的感受．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．無論我學習上需要什么她都給我買，盡管她沒有多少錢．
 whatever 引導名詞性從句．even though 盡管
【高分句型二】
I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes to make her look still young．我會攢錢買漂亮的衣服讓她看起來年輕．
動詞不定式表目的，make her look+形容詞，使她看起來怎么樣．

解答 My mother
We need love．We also need to love．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．（外貌）She is friendly．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．（愛好）
She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．【高分句型一】She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．（母親為我做的事情）Mother love is great and disinterested．We should be grateful to our mothers．（感受）
When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes to make her look still young．【高分句型二】I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most，I think．（愿望）

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