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13．從外貌、性格、學習及業余愛好等方面，相像一下你和你的好朋友之間的相同和不同之處．請用英語加以描寫，要用到形容詞或副詞的比較級形式，也可能用到最高級形式．文中不能出現真實的人名．
要求：1．詞數70左右．2．要點完整，層次清楚，語法正確．
My good friend and I
I like to have friends who are different from me．My best friend is Tom．In some ways we look the same，and in some ways we look different．We both have black eyes and black hair．We are both thin，butTom is much thinner．he is taller，more outgoing than me．And he is really more hard-working than me．I am good at English but he does well in math．We like playing basketball．Both he and I like sports show．But I like watching cartoon films，she likes watching talk show．I am lazier than him，Heis never late for class，But I always get up late．I think differences are not important in a friendship．
Although we have some differences，we are good friends．Our friendship will last forever．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I like to have friends who are different from me我喜歡擁有和我不同的朋友．
who are different from me作為定語從句，修飾friends．
【高分句型二】
Although we have some differences，we are good friends雖然我們有些不同，但是我們是好朋友．
although引導的讓步狀語從句．

解答 My good friend and I
I like to have friends who are different from me【高分句型一】．My best friend is Tom．In some ways we look the same，and in some ways we look different．We both have black eyes and black hair．We are both thin，but Tom is much thinner．he is taller，more outgoing than me．（外貌和性格）And he is really more hard-working than me．I am good at English but he does well in math．（學習）We like playing basketball．Both he and I like sports show．But I like watching cartoon films，she likes watching talk show．（愛好）I am lazier than him，He is never late for class，But I always get up late． I think differences are not important in a friendship．
Although we have some differences，we are good friends．【高分句型二】Our friendship will last forever．

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