Question

假設(shè)你是張磊，下面是你的成績(jī)報(bào)告單。請(qǐng)給你的筆友John發(fā)一封電子郵件，告訴他你的成績(jī)和老師的評(píng)價(jià)。要求：語(yǔ)句通順，不少于60個(gè)詞，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Subject	Mark	Remark
Math	80	can do better
Chinese	90	hard-working
English	95	good at speaking and reading
Science	55	a lazy student
PE	95	run fastest in school

Dear John,
How time flies! I had the tests last week and got my report card today.___________________
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I am looking forward to your letter!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Lei

Answer 1

Dear John,
How time flies! I had the tests last week and got my report card today. I got 80 in math, and my math teacher said that I could do better. I got 90 in Chinese, and I am happy that the teacher said I was hard-working. You know that I like English very much, and I got 95 in it. The teacher said that I was good at speaking and reading. I only got 55 in science, and I am very sad. The science teacher said that I was a lazy student. As for PE, that is my favorite subject. I got 95. The teacher said that I ran fastest in my school. That’s so exciting.
I am looking forward to your letter!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Lei

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封信。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。