Question

現在環境變得越來越差。環境問題影響著人們的工作，學習，生活。而我們的工作，生活，生產又使環境污染越來越嚴重……如何保護我們的環境?請以“How to protect/save our environment/world?”為題寫一篇短文。

提示：1．水污染和大氣污染越來越嚴重

2．森林被破壞和砍伐

3．白色垃圾隨處可見

要求：1．如何改善/保護環境？至少3～4個方面，80詞左右。

2．文中不得出現真實的地址和姓名。

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

How to protect our environment?

The environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution. And when trees are cut down, some animals disappear. There is more and more dirty smoke in the air. People's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, it's time for us to protect our environment. Firstly, we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere. And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, for this saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. Don't use plastic bags. Also, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them. We hope our environment is more and more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，所給要點條理清晰，要求明確，內容貼近社會熱點，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真審題，勾勒要點，并適當發揮。行文中要注意人稱、時態的變化及主謂一致問題。同時注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文能夠根據寫作提示，較好地把與寫作相關的內容進行歸納整合，文章內容覆蓋所有要點，語言表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結構組織上很好地使用了簡單句和復合句，使文章自然流暢。同時，使用了一些常用句式和短語，如：more and more、because of、died of、In order to、it's time for sb to do、throw away、as long as possible stop --- cutting等，這為文章增色不少。在學習中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：提綱作文。