Question

14．請根據下面提示，以"My best friend and I"為題，寫一篇約60詞的短文．
1．我的好朋友名叫琳達．
2．我們看上去一樣但是我們也有不同．
3．我們都有黑眼睛、黑頭發．
4．她比我高，比我文靜，很認真．
5．我外向一點，而且比她風趣．
6．我們都喜歡讀書，我們能分享一切．
My Best Friend and I
I have a good friend．Her name is Linda．In some ways we look the same．But in other ways we are different．We both have black eyes and black hair．She is taller and quieter than me．She is very careful．I'm a little more outgoing than her．I am also funnier than her．We both like reading．She is good at English．But I am good at Chinese．We often help each other．We both like reading，we can share everything with each other．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I'm a little more outgoing than her我比她外向一點．
a little修飾比較級more outgoing
【高分句型二】
She is good at English她擅長英語．
be good at 擅長

解答 My Best Friend and I
I have a good friend．Her name is Linda．（我的好朋友名叫琳達．）In some ways we look the same．But in other ways we are different（我們看上去一樣但是我們也有不同．）．We both have black eyes and black hair．（我們都有黑眼睛、黑頭發）She is taller and quieter than me．She is very careful（她比我高，比我文靜，很認真．）．I'm a little more outgoing than her．【高分句型一】I am also funnier than her．（我外向一點，而且比她風趣．）We both like reading．She is good at English．【高分句型二】But I am good at Chinese．We often help each other．We both like reading，we can share everything with each other．（我們都喜歡讀書，我們能分享一切．）

點評 寫作要抓住要點．要在"準"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數關系和動詞時態等諸多方面．在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子要進行默寫，這樣在寫作時就能寫出準確地道的作文．