Question

請你寫一篇作文，描寫你的家鄉近幾年來的變化。從馬路、交通、建筑物、商店、旅游、人口、居住條件等方面進行描述。（不少于80詞）

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Answer 1

I was born in a poor and small village with pure water and green mountains.People there are friendly.They used to rode their bike or just walked to town.Great changes have taken place in recent years.People live in an apartment.Shops can be seen everywhere.Roads are getting wider and wider.They go to town by bus and taxi.More and more visitors come here to spend their holidays.However,the air is not as flesh as before,and the trees are getting fewer and fewer.Now,they all realize that protect the environment is very important.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，題材貼近學生生活，學生有話可說。所給材料比較簡潔，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把涵蓋的內容表達出來。因此，動筆前要認真審題，羅列要點，并適當發揮。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文主要取材于學生身邊發生的事。在行文過程中，多用簡單句，同時使用一些固定句式和短語，如: pure water and green mountains、 Great changes have taken place、 more and more 、as ---as等，這為文章增色不少。在學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點：話題作文。