Question

假如你是張華，現(xiàn)要用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封加入動(dòng)物協(xié)會(huì)的申請(qǐng)信：

要點(diǎn)：1.你是第一中學(xué)8年級(jí)學(xué)生；因?yàn)橄矚g動(dòng)物，所以想成為動(dòng)物協(xié)會(huì)的一名成員；

2.對(duì)生物和地理感興趣；最喜歡春天因?yàn)檫@是放風(fēng)箏的好時(shí)節(jié)；

3.你熱愛(ài)自然并理解保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的重要性，

4.可撥打0510-12345678或發(fā)電子郵件zhanghua@hotmail.com聯(lián)系你；

5.你加入該協(xié)會(huì)后的感受和做法。（請(qǐng)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮1-2句）

Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to join the Animal Society.

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Yours sincerely,

Zhang Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to join the Animal Society.

I am a Grade 8 student at No.1 Middle School. I love animals, so I want to be a member of the Animal Society.

I am interested in Biology and Geography. I love spring best because it’s a perfect time to fly kites. I enjoy the natural world and understand the importance of protecting the wild animals.

You can call me on 0510-12345678 or e-mail me at zhanghua@hotmail.com. I will be happy if I can become a member of the Animal Society. I can take part in activities every Sunday afternoon.

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求寫(xiě)一篇加入動(dòng)物協(xié)會(huì)的申請(qǐng)信，并且給出了比較明確的要點(diǎn)。很明顯本文該用第一人稱(chēng)去寫(xiě)作，主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。要注意使用準(zhǔn)確的語(yǔ)句表達(dá)每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文內(nèi)容精悍，精明扼要地闡明了自己想加入動(dòng)物協(xié)會(huì)的理由，并且包含了題目中所要求的全部信息。提醒學(xué)生平時(shí)注意短語(yǔ)和固定句式的積累。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。