Question

書面表達

下表是Wendy在春節期間某天的旅游記錄：請根據表中所提供的信息, 幫助她寫一封郵件, 告訴她在北京的網友自己的旅行情況。要求：70詞左右（不包括已給的開頭）。

	Main points	Details
Place	Hong Kong	The Oriental Pearl (東方之珠), a wonderful city
Date	February 6	pleasant weather
People	My parents and I
Activities	Hong Kong Disneyland	Fantasyland and Adventureland
Hong Kong Ocean Park	Took many photos of sea animals
Feeling	Excited	Want to see other places of interest

Dear Mary,

It was a wonderful day today! And what a good time we had in Hong Kong!________________

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Yours,

Wendy

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Mary,

It was a wonderful day today. And what a good time we had in Hong Kong!

Hong Kong is famous as the Oriental Pearl. It is a wonderful city. We had pleasant weather today. In the morning, my parents and I went to Hong Kong Disneyland. We visited Fantasyland and Adventureland. We also watched a parade of Disney characters. Later we visited Hong Kong Ocean Park. We took many photos of the sea animals there.

I was so excited. And tomorrow, I want to see more places of interest!

Yours,

Wendy

【解析】

試題分析：本文所給材料較為詳細，要求介紹自己的一次旅行。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態為一般過去態時態，注意時態和時間狀語的搭配。動筆前可以按照材料內容列出簡單提綱，寫出關鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：做英語書面表達時，要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態；分析內容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后多讀多修改，我想一定會寫出滿意的文章來。